This is really good! Although - are you going to cut it down a lot for the final thing? Currently it doesn't feel especially teaserish - it's more like the beginning of a story
Yes, these are just some bits i can use. They'll be rearanged for the final cut, well the bits i use.
This is really good! Although - are you going to cut it down a lot for the final thing? Currently it doesn't feel especially teaserish - it's more like the beginning of a story
ReplyDeleteYes, these are just some bits i can use. They'll be rearanged for the final cut, well the bits i use.
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